Posted by: morethananelectrician | January 23, 2009

A Writing Partner

It was really a fun evening around here.

I made it home a little late, but we all had a quick dinner and everyone already had their bath and my wife was entertaining my one year old son and four year old daughter for a while.

Instead of opening my laptop and doing some work or checking in with you guys, I decided to play some Wii with my son and was able to prove to him that I am still the master of football.   He can do all of the fancy spins and juke moves, but I reminded him that my simple way of playing the game is effective and successful.

After they went to bed, I stayed up and put together my first real written material.  It needs to be put together, in my opinion, in a larger format so I can substitute parts in and out as necessary to lengthen and shorten it to meet the time restraints and the group.

I would love to be able to bounce this stuff off of someone, but my son is probably the funniest person I know, but he doesn’t know (for a good reason) what a lesbian is yet and using him as a guide would just lead to all sorts of other questions and really make the whole experience unpleasant.

It was fun sitting and writing and I am coming up with a few different methods to see what works for me.

Initially, I had put together a small box of index cards and just started jotting simple things on them and putting them in the box.   That is probably a good idea than just keeping things in my head, but it really worked well sitting down in front of the keyboard and writing this down as a whole set.   

The stories were simple enough in my head that they went down on paper easily and I really didn’t care about the way it “sounded” on paper because these are things that are going to be told and not written.  Writing something and speaking the same thing are totally different experiences.  

I did buy a digital recorded to practice with, but finding the time and place to do this is going to be difficult.   My wife is NOT funny and she would definitely not be a judge of anything funny…


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  1. i love that you played wii with your son instead of going online or working. it may seem that time with your children goes painfully slow (especially when they’re misbehaving or you’re tired), but i promise that the time flies by and they will be grown in the blink of an eye.

    enjoy them because they’re only on loan to you for a finite period of time. then they leave and have lives of their own…and you’ll miss them. :)

    well, aren’t i just a little ray of sunshine today???

    ps. your wife doesn’t know about your blog?

    You are awfully bright and cheery today…

    Mrs. MTAE hasn’t a clue about N*ked on the Roof.

  2. I always feel this way about my writing. I wish I had a somewhat objective audience. I think it must be even harder trying to write comedy to perform- even an objective audience knows you’re trying to be funny. Maybe once you start performing you’ll find someone you can practice on.

    I can practice stuff a bit on people through out the day…I see a ton of people, but none of them are friends… I just can’t put it all together in one set for them.

  3. I haven’t played Wii bowling with my parents in a while. We should try to find the time for that this weekend with my brother’s bday coming up.

    My son and I have a golf game wwe like to play too! Bowling has become a bit boring. It would be more fun if Mrs. MTAE would play too!

  4. Bet you that your son will remember that you chose to play with him instead of the laptop.

    He needs to remember that dad whooped his butt on that field!!!!

  5. It is hard to be objective about your own writing – I’ve done a few writing workshops with other people and though it was painful to share my stuff, it was really insightful to get other opinions. If you ever need/want some input, I’d be happy to do it. Not saying I’m an expert by any means, but I have taken enough editing classes so at least I could pick out any typos for you! Which is why I get so mad when I rush to put up a post without proofreading it and have a mistake.

    I’m dying to get a Wii, for both games we could play together and the fit for exercise – my sister loves it!

    Well…I couldn’t care less about typos for a comedy act. Unless I passed out a script.

    The Wii is really cool.

  6. feel free to bounce it this way. I have lots of experience critiquing. plus i really want to hear about the funniness…

    I may take you up on that, but there is much more in the delivery than the material…

  7. You know you can add audio to your naked place here, right? We could judge …uh I mean critique your work. I don’t think adding audio is too difficult, especially for a guy who seems to be able to do anything.

    I’ll wait on the audio for a while yet…unless I send it to you individually.

  8. It’ll be so much fun when your son is old enough for you to share your writing w/him. I’m sure he’ll cherish it later on…

    This stuff is all still a secret now…

  9. I’d be happy to take a look at it.

    bound and gags at g mail dot com

    I might take you up on that…this is a little up yor alley!

  10. Your wife is not funny… such a tragedy. Tho, I believe my husband doesn’t find me funny either… but most everyone else does in a range of “ironic” to “what the H@LL?”.

    Maybe it’s just you men…

    Of course… since I am so freaking hilarious… you can always toss it my way to take a look at… you’ve got the email. :)

    Cheers!
    Jamie

    I know funny…you are funny.

  11. Sounds like things are starting to come together in this new adventure. I can’t wait till you share some of these funnys because seriously, I could use some serious laughter right about now!
    Sounds like you and your son have a good time…that’s awesome!

    Many of the funnies are already in this blog…it is my life.

  12. I still can’t figure out how your wife knows nothing of this blog??? Don’t you sit and chuckle at the computer at all of our witty comments??? And all your responses… are you responding on a blackberry or something? Is Mrs. MTAE a blind woman???

    I’d chuckle if YOU PEOPLE WERE FUNNY!!! Some responses are on the Blackberry, but I am generally ignored in my own house.

  13. I’m available for bouncing…

    Wait. That didn’t come out right.

    GAME ON!!!!!

  14. Laura! LOL!

    Our Wii showed up today. I got to bowl one game and then the kids took over. I’m goin’ back for a little Mario Party pretty soon.

    So, you don’t amuse your wife? Funny how that works. I think I’m a riot, but my husband spends a lot of time shaking his head at me.

    I amuse her…SHE isn’t funny. Really. My son and I just stare at her. She is funnier than she used to be…but it is not good. She makes NO ONE laugh.

  15. Make sure to record your preformances. Then you could upload them and let us all do that critiquing.

    Good for you. Sounds like fun and something that I always wanted to do myself but never will.

    I will record them for sure…I am months away though.

  16. Just don’t bounce ideas off the dog… they just tilt their head at everything you say before jumping in your lap like its snuggle time- not caring if the laptop is there or not.

    I like to bounce ideas off of customers… considering it is mostly ppl I don’t know and they Read. Hehe

    I am willing to be a bouncee if needed… all in the name of humor! :)

    I would use my nine year old son before the dog…

  17. hey my cuz has done standup at zanies and is a really cool, intelligent guy. he is on disablility for his cerebral palsy so he only works part time as a DJ for 102.9 the buzz in nashville. he has a myspace page and a non-profit page where he is trying to get kids together with adults with the same disabilities. so long story short, he would be a great sounding board and might even have some connections for you.

    http://www.myspace.com/randyalexander

    or his non-profit is

    http://www.heroesintraining.org

  18. So, when are you going to do a live online stream for us to watch? qik.com would be a good place to do it…

  19. When monkeys fly out of my ass!


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